https://wiki-dev.creativecommons.org/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=CCi_reviews_second_draft 2026-10-01T07:21:28Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.43.9 https://wiki-dev.creativecommons.org/index.php?title=CCi_reviews_second_draft&diff=52925&oldid=prev 2011-09-28T16:37:38Z

<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 16:37, 28 September 2011</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1">Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Back to [[<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Worldwide </del>Overview]] &gt;&gt; Step VII. [[Legal Project Lead produces second draft]]</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Back to [[<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">International </ins>Overview]] &gt;&gt; Step VII. [[Legal Project Lead produces second draft]]</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>&lt;b&gt;Suggested Timeframe:&lt;/b&gt; one month</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>&lt;b&gt;Suggested Timeframe:&lt;/b&gt; one month</div></td></tr> </table>

Aurelia Schultz https://wiki-dev.creativecommons.org/index.php?title=CCi_reviews_second_draft&diff=52923&oldid=prev 2011-09-28T16:36:34Z

<p><span class="autocomment">Reviewing the second draft</span></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 16:36, 28 September 2011</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l3">Line 3:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 3:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>&lt;b&gt;Suggested Timeframe:&lt;/b&gt; one month</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>&lt;b&gt;Suggested Timeframe:&lt;/b&gt; one month</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>=Reviewing the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">second </del>draft=</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>=Reviewing the <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">next </ins>draft=</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Please send the second draft and any relevant material to <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">CCi</del>. <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Catharina </del>will review the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">second </del>draft and collaborate with the Legal Project Lead to fine-tune the licenses and confirm that all aspects have been addressed.  </div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Please send the second draft and any relevant material to <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">CC</ins>. <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The legal team </ins>will review the <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">next </ins>draft and collaborate with the Legal Project Lead to fine-tune the licenses and confirm that all aspects have been addressed.  </div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>As with the first draft, this collaboration will be conducted either on a public list or offline.  </div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>As with the first draft, this collaboration will be conducted either on a public list or offline.  </div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Again, please be patient at this stage. Sometimes local legal experts continue to make revisions once the second draft has been submitted to <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">CCi</del>. It is sometimes necessary to redraft the licenses several times before reaching a final, stable version.  </div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Again, please be patient at this stage. Sometimes local legal experts continue to make revisions once the second draft has been submitted to <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">CC</ins>. It is sometimes necessary to redraft the licenses several times before reaching a final, stable version.  </div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>However, please keep encouraging the input from your community. In the end, it will ensure that all bases have been covered and that your jurisdiction will be able to offer the most complete licenses possible!</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>However, please keep encouraging the input from your community. In the end, it will ensure that all bases have been covered and that your jurisdiction will be able to offer the most complete licenses possible!</div></td></tr> </table>

CCID-diane peters https://wiki-dev.creativecommons.org/index.php?title=CCi_reviews_second_draft&diff=9552&oldid=prev 2007-11-12T12:11:11Z

<p>New page: Back to <a href="/wiki/Worldwide_Overview" class="mw-redirect" title="Worldwide Overview">Worldwide Overview</a> &gt;&gt; Step VII. <a href="/wiki/Legal_Project_Lead_produces_second_draft" title="Legal Project Lead produces second draft">Legal Project Lead produces second draft</a> &lt;b&gt;Suggested Timeframe:&lt;/b&gt; one month =Reviewing the second draft= Please send the second draft ...</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>Back to [[Worldwide Overview]] &gt;&gt; Step VII. [[Legal Project Lead produces second draft]]<br /> <br /> &lt;b&gt;Suggested Timeframe:&lt;/b&gt; one month<br /> <br /> =Reviewing the second draft=<br /> <br /> Please send the second draft and any relevant material to CCi. Catharina will review the second draft and collaborate with the Legal Project Lead to fine-tune the licenses and confirm that all aspects have been addressed. <br /> <br /> As with the first draft, this collaboration will be conducted either on a public list or offline. <br /> <br /> Again, please be patient at this stage. Sometimes local legal experts continue to make revisions once the second draft has been submitted to CCi. It is sometimes necessary to redraft the licenses several times before reaching a final, stable version. <br /> <br /> However, please keep encouraging the input from your community. In the end, it will ensure that all bases have been covered and that your jurisdiction will be able to offer the most complete licenses possible!<br /> <br /> ----<br /> <br /> Next: Step IX. [[Project leads finalize licenses and arrange technical requirements]]</div>

Michelle Thorne